New website, new company, feedback appreciated

treewill

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Hi all,

I've just recently finished all my necessary steps to become a legitimate corporate entity in the state of Oregon, and so I've launched a website: www.emergenttreeworks.com

Generally speaking, I'm not trying to go the retail arboriculture route. I'll have some clients but mostly I plan to subcontract as an independent climber/arborist. Therefore the point of the site is not so much to explain to the lay person what arboriculture is and all that jazz, but more to present myself as a serious and dedicated tree worker to the various people I might work with.

Your feedback is greatly appreciated

Cheers,
Will
 
I think it's a really nice site. Great media and good looking format. It left me wanting to know more. I wanna know how someone comes to do tree work all over the globe? Anyway, I wonder if some more focus on the climbing styles and techniques would benefit you? I guess I'm thinking more of the guys around here. Showing proficiency in crane work, srt and spikes would be more beneficial here. It is a very nice site though.
 
It left me wanting to know more. I wanna know how someone comes to do tree work all over the globe? ... Showing proficiency in crane work, srt and spikes would be more beneficial here.

Thanks for the feedback Steve. Did you check out some of the gallery pics? I intended that section to perform that function, especially since most folks prefer to look at pretty pictures rather than read text. But it is hard to know what people will actually look at when they check out a site. I have added a crane job pic.
As far as traveling, that's a hard one to explain concisely. I do believe though that the hardest part of traveling is making the decision to make it a priority. You don't need to be rich or fabulously connected, you just have to decide it's something you'll prioritize. Not having a family or lots of debt helps too.
Thanks for the feedback guys. So far the only major critisism I've had is from a friend who said that she looked at my site and figured that I would be too expensive. Don't really know what to do with that though.
 
Here are some of my thoughts, Will--

The site is visually gorgeous and having said that, I found the text difficult to read due to the letters and sentences being a bit crammed. I see you used SquareSpace as your website design tool and it does a terrific job with images and clean layouts, and I think you can adjust the text spacing and perhaps enlarge it a little. People do tend to gravitate to pictures and video first, yet it is important to connect the visual with a message they can understand clearly, otherwise it is like a really clever TV commercial that people remember but can't recall what the product was.

It is kind of hard to tell what you really want to do, who your ideal client is. Sometimes I would guess that it was quasi-governmental agencies and sometimes municipal and forest services, sometimes larger tree care companies. That may be where the critique comes from about feeling like you'd be expensive. I had some difficulty as well in thinking how I would "find" you in the internet world as there isn't a consistent phrase that shakes out from the text you provide. Searching the internet relies on text because pictures are invisible to the search engines.

I think you might consider renaming "Gallery" to "Portfolio" since you have combined the photos with a description of the work being done. I would think that for the level of work you are pitching, you might want to add a more in-depth 'case study' or two that shows off your specialization in terms of working with unusual tree species, growing conditions, or whatever is truly unique about your expertise. Are you the Red Adair of climbing arborists, tackling complex situations or solving difficult problems? Or is it more about the ecology of the tree canopy, forests and sustainability, sort of a Jane Goodall in climbing gear and chainsaw? Is is both? I think it may be both!

I think your personal story of how you chose to travel this path would be a compelling bit of reading for people, and may prove valuable in marketing yourself without trying to obviously market yourself.

Testimonials from those who have recruited you to work on a job is going to be valuable, too, especially fellow arborists if you are strictly subcontracting. A detailed LinkedIn profile wouldn't hurt, either, with a link to and from your website. You can do that in SquareSpace. I also see that you should be able to now link to a Google+ profile which might be also good to have, and where you can join some arborist communities that are worldwide--good way to network with tree care companies around the globe (I've seen a lot in the UK who like to share photos and stuff on "Tree Care -- Arboriculture" Community on Google+).

Hope this is helpful in one way or another. I would be interested in how you make out with SquareSpace, it is not one of my favorites for website design because you tend to be stuck with the functionality that company decides you should have and I find that limiting compared with Wordpress and other 'open source' platforms. I also thought it was wicked expensive, too!

Cheers!
 
Nice, Will. Very creative. I had the sensation of rapelling through the canopy of your website, which was pleasant, but the ascent (and maybe this is mixing too many metaphors) back up through the layers made for some moderate difficulty in locating oneself. Your services tab, for instance, needs to be more perspicuous and state clearly what it is that you do. I am sure you are aware of this. Just a thought. Looks good!
 
Carol,
Thanks for the invaluable feedback. I think you're totally right about the text, and I will make changes there for sure. I hear what you're saying about having a more specific message and description, that's one I've had a lot of trouble with. I have lots of interests and my work reflects this, so I sometimes have trouble boiling it down to something that's easy to remember.
Because I don't plan to be a 'retail arborist' type of company, I'm less concerned in trying to make someone who stumbles on the website call me for work. It's more intended for people who I already work (or would like to work) for, to sell myself as a serious tree worker. If it does that, that's all I really want out of it.

As far as Squarespace, I hear what you're saying about it being limiting. I have run up against a few things I would like to change which I can't. That said, I've worked a lot on the Ascending the Giants website (which is wordpress I think) and have found that very frustrating. There's the ability to do lots, but I can only figure out how to do very little because I'm not a programmer. For cost, when I factored in the free domain it was quite reasonable. I think we pay almost that much for the ATG hosting, without any of the proprietary website building software that comes with Squarespace. So far, for my limited website needs, they've come through for me quite well.
Cheers
 
That website look beautiful! Carol's points were good. I also like that you know what you want the goal of the website to be and built it to focus on that. Many people don't have that main goal in mind and the website ends up being confusing. All of your content, both text and images, convey the right message for who you are targeting.

Really really nice.
 
Carol,
Thanks for the invaluable feedback. I think you're totally right about the text, and I will make changes there for sure. I hear what you're saying about having a more specific message and description, that's one I've had a lot of trouble with. I have lots of interests and my work reflects this, so I sometimes have trouble boiling it down to something that's easy to remember.
Because I don't plan to be a 'retail arborist' type of company, I'm less concerned in trying to make someone who stumbles on the website call me for work. It's more intended for people who I already work (or would like to work) for, to sell myself as a serious tree worker. If it does that, that's all I really want out of it.

As far as Squarespace, I hear what you're saying about it being limiting. I have run up against a few things I would like to change which I can't. That said, I've worked a lot on the Ascending the Giants website (which is wordpress I think) and have found that very frustrating. There's the ability to do lots, but I can only figure out how to do very little because I'm not a programmer. For cost, when I factored in the free domain it was quite reasonable. I think we pay almost that much for the ATG hosting, without any of the proprietary website building software that comes with Squarespace. So far, for my limited website needs, they've come through for me quite well.
Cheers
Hi Will,

I don't know if I got copied on your reply but have been busy with a lot of things and finally decided to come find out what's going on, and you're welcome for the two cents' worth. Just an informational element, Ascending the Giants is definitely not Wordpress but I'm not sure what it is (not all web publishers come with recognizable file names).

Good luck with the endeavor and I'm always happy to help anyone with questions!
 
Hi all,

I've just recently finished all my necessary steps to become a legitimate corporate entity in the state of Oregon, and so I've launched a website: www.emergenttreeworks.com

Generally speaking, I'm not trying to go the retail arboriculture route. I'll have some clients but mostly I plan to subcontract as an independent climber/arborist. Therefore the point of the site is not so much to explain to the lay person what arboriculture is and all that jazz, but more to present myself as a serious and dedicated tree worker to the various people I might work with.

Your feedback is greatly appreciated

Cheers,
Will

Hi Will,

I would first add it so your email and phone number are in the header of the site. As of now, it makes more work for your customer. Also, when i initially opened the site it took quite some time to load. I would also either add a contact form on the bottom of the page or a contact page.
 
Love the graphics and pics... looks awesome, but have to agree with Web guy. I am updating my site now, but it is vital to have the contact form. When I hit contact... i can't submit... People like to search and just fill out a form for an estimate.

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Your site needs to be optimized (you can make them smaller in size, yet still visually appealing) - the images take too long to load for mobile devices.
 
Also, it isn't clear at first what the site is about or calling for. I need to scroll to the second section to see it is a service. At first, it seems to be an informational site for trees. A simple fix would be putting the second section or third section first.

It is a beautiful site though - well designed.
 

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